Weblog Entry:
Write a brief (two page) descriptive piece about yourself that you would be
willing to read out loud to others engaged in the same exercise. Do this by
offering a narrative of some revealing and representative 'moment'-perhaps a
kind of moment that tended to recur-in your life. Sometimes the most telling moments,
those that play a significant role in how we come to be who we are, are subtle,
small moments, rather than 'big' life-changing experiences. Some of these small
but significant moments are barely remembered until we start looking for them
with writing. Thus, they engage readers in the writer's process of discovery,
which is what good writing should do.
Your piece will necessarily be a blend of showing and telling, of description
and more explicit analysis, but make sure not to substitute telling readers how
you felt for re-creating the experience that made you feel as you did. Offer
your experience of a revealing moment to your readers. Avoid evaluative (empty
of detail, judgmental) adjectives. Insofar as judgments are being made in your
piece, let them be implied rather than overtly started..." (10).
Private Journal Entry:
Then produce an entry that blends empirical detail (showing) and analysis
(your interpretation). Analyze moments in your weblog where you were not able
to express fully what you wanted to say because of the non-judgmental restraint
or where you felt liberated by the restraint to describe yourself more specifically.
Again, diagnose rather than judge. Don't tell your imagined readers what you liked or
disliked about what you could or could not say. Tell them instead what was interesting
and revealing and why (31).
Private Journals:
For the next four weeks, try to write in your private journals at least once a week.
"The best way to get a journal to work for you is to experiment. You might try,
for example, copying and commenting on statements from your reading or class meetings
that you found potentially illuminating. Use the journal to write down the ideas,
reactions, and germs of ideas you had during a class discussion or that you found
running around in your head after a late night's reading. Use the journal to retain
your first impressions to books or films of music or performances of whatever, so
that you can look back at them and trace the development of your thinking.
Try to write in your journal every day. As with freewriting, the best way to
get started is just to start, see what happens, and take it from there. Also
as with freewriting, the more you write, the more you'll find yourself noticing
and thus the more you'll have to say" (16).