Weblog Entry:
"Please choose someone you know or have just met and describe them to someone
who does not know them (You may use last class' free write). Listen in on some
conversations, writing down as much seemingly relevant detail (exact words and
probably the physical actions that accompany them) as you can. Don't worry about
order. Just keep recording what you see and hear and asking yourself what you
notice. You will be able to shape the piece later in a way that you think best
represents what you heard. After you have done the work of recording, say to
yourself, "What did I learn? What was especially interesting, or revealing, or
strange, about what I heard?" Respond to these questions with freewriting,
preferably in more than one freewriting session. Then produce two pieces of
revised (shaped and ordered) writing. One should be the show-versus-tell
'recording' of what you heard, the one that you hope will communicate by
re-creating-without your explicitly telling-the effect that the talk had on
you [your weblog entry]. The other [entry should go into your private journal
and] should be a blend of empirical detail (showing) and analysis (your
interpretation). Analyze rather than judge. Don't tell your readers what
you liked or disliked. Tell them instead what was interesting and revealing
and why" (31).